Try to cut back on the purple prose, google it if you don't know what it means. You have a good imagination, keep practicing and keep writing.
I write adult/erotic short stories and ebooks, often in the fantasy & horror genre. Expect dark, sexual, and violent themes.
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Try to cut back on the purple prose, google it if you don't know what it means. You have a good imagination, keep practicing and keep writing.
Lol Yeah, purple prose is something most critics say I use a little bit too much of. Thanks for taking the time to read and give feedback, its much appriciated!
You seen this post?
http://sirjeffofshort.newgrounds.com/news/post/867240
Holy shit. Thanks man, i have actually been looking for something like these.
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tailsbuddy
Only one way to describe.
"Amazing."
WritingThot
Can't tell if sarcastic or sincere lol
Either way, thanks for taking the time to read and comment.