I think it's a great poem and it would be a real lose if you deleted it. but it's a good thing to get to terms with yourself through this. i do that with writing and sining (as well as drawing)
Thanks for explaining it to me it means alot ^^
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I think it's a great poem and it would be a real lose if you deleted it. but it's a good thing to get to terms with yourself through this. i do that with writing and sining (as well as drawing)
Thanks for explaining it to me it means alot ^^
No problem.
To clarify, I meant deleting my explanation. I know in some cases having the writer's interpretation of their poem kind of taints the piece for some people.
NyanaCreation
it's a good poem, but it makes me worry a bit.
i hope your okay otherwise you did a really good job with writing that.
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If it gives any context (which I'm not sure it's right of me to give) this was written when I was in a pretty deep stupor a month ago. All I did was sleep and go to work, nothing much else. Sleep is the cousin to death, or so I've heard, and when you can't do much more then lay in bed and sleep, you can really feel like your dying. It's one reason why I've jokingly started calling sleep an opiate recently, cause it is pretty addicting.
If this is my first poem you've read, I'll go ahead and tell you that I usually channel most of my really darker emotions into prose. It kinda helps me come to terms with myself (Hell, there's one poem I have in my library on here about patricide). Your because reading my therapy lol.
Anyway, glad you liked it for what it was. I'll probably wait a few days till you see this then delete it. I always feel so pretentious explaining what my poems mean to me.